Katniss
November21
Katniss
Despaired is a midnight black
and it tasted like sour milk
It reeks with burning coal
And feels like a peace keepers arm ripping your sister away
It sounds like Effie Trinket’s voice when she announces your best friends,sister,the only person you love
Despair is the last flicker of burning candle
-By: Sallie Ann, Chandler, and Arisha
That was great writing. I loved the way you put the feelings of the person into the writing.
This is a great piece of writing! It made me feel like I was actually there! The emotions in the writing are amazing.